my mom in her office, I'll upload something I wrote long time ago.
kisses to all!
Saturday 15 April 2006
Funny how nearly deceived by placing the date ... as my fingers are still in the 1990 and something xD (1996 to be exact n_n)
these days of Easter had thought of using them to clean my room, make sketches of figures I and complete the workshop brochure.
But guess ... uu
of sketches, took 12 of 50 uu .. and are for Monday TT.TT
From the brochure ... 0%, no nothing ... I have not even asked k-chan to lend me my monkey I let him in your PC ... ouh! >. \u0026lt;
But I cleaned my room ... Well, at least swept
xD Wow, I have not done anything and we're through Saturday. Even I had not thought to have done today. I was going to call my Imouto-chan, but my mom's phone was off ... when no! ... nu but I can say nothing against that, I am expert tb leave the cell without battery, missed and / or off.
: sigh:
Yesterday I was thinking about several things, most concerning Sano and Meg: P
out my mind at last, finally after all this time my head has returned to get a "high" with that couple that I adore. I still very little capital EOYV 11, but it's something and that means I want to write and want to finish this fic.
And that is good, needed some romance fantasy, semi-major problems and situations where my head can only drool xD. But seriously, my Fangirl I was asking something of them both. It may have been rereading my old fics made me get my act together and write, however, the title of the chapter. But, indeed, when I did more than anything to finish the story and then a guilty conscience large ... u_u
Yesterday, while wandering through the inet
I began to review what we had, fic fic looking for something good to keep to read later. Three caught my eye (mostly by sumary ú.ù) Last night I dreamed you, piano melody: For you and for tonight.
"piano melody. For you "is written by Megumi Sagara ... and it shows. The fic is excellent, long time since I read something like that. I really liked (despite being AU ... naa ... I do not take into account, I've been reading too much "Please do not Review"), grammar, writing, the style of her ... cool. Loved it, revise it if they can recommend it n_n
The other two ... the truth, I could not read. I started with my best win, but I could not follow. "Last night I dreamed of you" is Andrascea (something), really I can not swallow his style, I dunno, like I do not get .... bad ... I just read the end of the fic (without reading the rest -///-), and ends great, very good, but something between the beginning and the end I did not manage to get into the story. Quisas is being used to the style of Megumi Sagara, Megumi14, Kary, vargn ... I love his work, I always leave the plot in between, wanting desperately to know more and finish the story.
But ... I'll give it another chance and try to read fiction without getting bored or saying "oh god ... I can not go anymore! ".
Although definitely not going to continue reading "For this night." It's awful, the grammar is awful, not know how to use punctuation, hopefully knows what a comma or a period followed. Abuses of the ellipsis. Disarm all the wonder that existed in the capital when Sano is seriously injured by Saitou (I love that capi ... Meg cares so much ^. ^) And kill the concern Meg by him, becomes a nympho ... not an exaggeration.
The fic starts relatively low, the first paragraph is swallowed with effort, hoping the next would be better. Error!, The paragraph that follows is a manifestation of "I love kenshin, damn you do not like ... pq oh! Sano and I hate you ".. arg! disgust. But, after closing the file and think about it, it was decided to give him a another chance, at least, to leave a review to the author with a well-considered advice that says "know, is good, but grammar fixes" . The problem, the paragraphs that follow are not so bad ... Well, yes, they are bad, but between all the junk "I hate you both, but you're so cute .. ah! and worth saving "thing is starting to calm a little and the girl (or boy ... can not remember who wrote it) tries to add some history, wave, for better forward motion the plot. That's good ...
should not declare victory too soon, I have learned with all the bad fics I read.
I think in a paragraph repeats both the "Healthy is a dangerous wound that will cause death, I should clean off germs" that reaches dizzy. Want to shout "ends soon! or died due to tetanus or pq thou crap tides with germs! ".
Anyway, I think there breath and went reading, trying to control my desire to close the file and delete it from my computer (not defile my beloved SuSe with these things ¬ ¬).
is at this moment when things get crazy. Now I do not hate him, love him with all his being .. Please! that is, I have to do almost dying to fall in love with me?, good tactic, eh?
So. .. xD Megumi now loves with all his being to Sano and can not let it eat the seeds Malulo (xDD). Sano and she wakes up, trying to confess his mania for sick people, he falls asleep (who is not) and tries to kick !!.... xDDD. There already was making me laugh, but then this girl Meg transforms "the silly love by germs "to" sexual maniac who wants to rape while convalescing Sano "... and entiendanlo literally. Sano Meg wants to sleep with him regardless of this all wrong for the "great" sore, even that begins to look right through the clothes ... xDD
my patience already out there and say so with the story. I got sick, was too ridiculous.
Please!, I know I do not write well, but I try to have some sense, at least to understand the pq Meg is attracted to this tori-atama we worship. Oh, and I tb PWP I have written about, where the "live the lack of plot and we are on the lemon MS", shine in all which reads .... but they have something more logical, at least in these fics the idea is, from beginning to end, to see them in lemon scenes.
This fic reminds me of a Portuguese I read in a page out there, remember that the English title was "Medicine ".... Magic Megumi something I'm not sure. This fic takes place in the same scene, Sano wounded by Saitou, Meg is going to cure it, but the interesting thing is how Meg cure Healthy:: insert here face of "u":: xD, and as Sano is recovered "miraculously" While treatment. The fic is good, is fun and everything is related, situations do not occur or be given by a whim, even suggest that it could have happened (as they never said anything in the series = 3), but "Tonight" the smearing .... definitely bad history.
I know this may sound cruel, but just think ... Just think of putting a Review ", the transition could improve the character of Meg and give better understand why you want to sleep with him, despite him being very serious. Oh and you could check the grammar ^.^"... tb So obviously all written very polite and sympathetic manner. But I think coming out in your DEFENSE friends of the girl and / or she will tell me a "mind you, I'm cool and great and you do not write," although I know that's a lie.
Anyway ... if I go to inet these days, I will do the review, at least I would have liked to tell me that if you just start writing fics and my fic is bad. Constructive criticism are very good n_n
Oh God, I think this day my modes "with the fics exquisite" and "bitchwritter-reader" might be within automatic .... -/////- Gomen if I hurt someone -//////////-
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PD: aunq either with pencil and paper, and I will put in writing fic I happened to healthy and meg ...
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